[wesnoth-commits] [wesnoth/wesnoth] 67a1ab: SoF Proofread Pass and Campaign Prose edits (#6177)

[Alexander Lacson]

  Branch: refs/heads/1.16
  Home:   https://github.com/wesnoth/wesnoth
  Commit: 67a1ab4567968b9b1ee0f90f9e702d414da84d4c
      https://github.com/wesnoth/wesnoth/commit/67a1ab4567968b9b1ee0f90f9e702d414da84d4c
  Author: Alexander Lacson <41433185+max-torch at users.noreply.github.com>
  Date:   2022-01-26 (Wed, 26 Jan 2022)

  Changed paths:
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/1_A_Bargain_is_Struck.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/2_Closing_the_Gates.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/2p5_Reaching_the_Runecrafter.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/3_Searching_for_the_Runecrafter.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/3t_The_Council_Regathers.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/4_Gathering_Materials.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/4t_The_Jeweler.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/5_Hills_of_the_Shorbear_Clan.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/6_Towards_the_Caves.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/7_Outriding_the_Outriders.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/8_The_Dragon.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/9_Caverns_of_Flame.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/scenarios/Epilogue.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/units/Cave_Wyrm.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/units/Cave_Wyrmlet.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/units/Red_Wyrm.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/units/Red_Wyrmlet.cfg
    M data/campaigns/Sceptre_of_Fire/utils/rune-equip.cfg

  Log Message:
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  SoF Proofread Pass and Campaign Prose edits (#6177)

* SoF Proofread Pass and Campaign Prose edits

This is a proofread pass. But this also has edits that are more than just minor edits which try to improve the campaign text.

commit

* SoF Proofread Second Draft

This is a changelog relative to the first draft:
- Fixed up "nor" in S1.
- reverted the ellipsis I added to indicate pause in story part of S2.
- Reworded my edit in S3 to be closer to the original.
- Followed Wedge's suggestion for S4.
- S5: Exchanged Shorbear dwarves and elves, removed introductory clause in ln 560, rewording in ln 592.
- Reverted my edit in S6.
- in S8, converted comma into ellipsis to indicate pause.
- S9: Reworded exposition of Thursagan, changed wording in ln1221, changed a period to a semi-colon.

* SoF Proofread Third Draft

* Update 4t_The_Jeweler.cfg

* Update 1_A_Bargain_is_Struck.cfg

removed a comma

* Update 1_A_Bargain_is_Struck.cfg

* More prose edits (SoF)

* Update 4t_The_Jeweler.cfg

* SoF Proofread Pass edits

* Capitalize Sceptre

* S5 and S9 small dialog change

* S6 change semicolon to period

* S9 change semicolon to exclamation

(cherry picked from commit ec66a0a83281aa3d83d8e644b01c6d23a015fd31)